i m d strength whenever i m in pain
i m d motivation whenever i m in vain
i m d laughter of my tedious life
i m d victim of the social strife
i m d silence of my clear sky
i m d anger of the peril behind
but i m also d melody of my optimist chi
cause i m the most deserving thing called life.........
Its nice dear... m impressd coz there r bery few who'll continue to follow this kinda interests during stressful technical lyf...
ReplyDeletekeep it up...
good first poem of the budding poetess shruti.
ReplyDeleteFresh n chifull...
poem so much reflects ur profound personality......
ReplyDeleteawsm wrk....will be looking for more...
real gud...
ReplyDeleteu can add up a last line sayin "im d one grt poet" nd evryone wud agree :)...
Mellifluous this is my favorite one...
ReplyDeletemy bff, u did like something.. i m gratified..
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