Saturday, November 13, 2010

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i m d strength whenever i m in pain

i m d motivation whenever i m in vain

i m d laughter of my tedious life

i m d victim of the social strife

i m d silence of my clear sky

i m d anger of the peril behind

but i m also d melody of my optimist chi

cause i m the most deserving thing called life.........

6 comments:

  1. Its nice dear... m impressd coz there r bery few who'll continue to follow this kinda interests during stressful technical lyf...

    keep it up...

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  2. good first poem of the budding poetess shruti.
    Fresh n chifull...

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  3. poem so much reflects ur profound personality......
    awsm wrk....will be looking for more...

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  4. real gud...
    u can add up a last line sayin "im d one grt poet" nd evryone wud agree :)...

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  5. Mellifluous this is my favorite one...

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